Resume/Cover Letter question?
I just wanted to know is this a good cover response. What else should i add?
I am writing in response to the wonderful opportunity to work on your Norwegian Cruise Line America cruise ship. Based on the requirements listed in the ad, I feel that my skills and experience is a great match for the position.
During my past work experience over the years I have obtain the skills required to work in a fast past environment such as this one.¬ Over the summer I work at a amusement park which had many staff members and customer on a daily basics. As a produce clerk customers are number one, the operation of the store wouldn’t exist without them. This would be a great opportunity
I am reliable, trustworthy, hard working, a team player, and would be a great asset to your company. Thank you for the opportunity and hopefully we will see each other soon.
Any advice would help thanks
updates a little more.
I am writing in response to the wonderful opportunity to work on your Norwegian Cruise Line America cruise ship. Based on the requirements listed in the ad, I feel that my skills and experience are a great match for the position.
During my past work experience over the years I have obtain the skills required to work in a fast past environment such as this one.¬ Over the summer I work at a amusement park which dealt with hundreds of customer on a daily basics. As a produce clerk customers were number one, the operation of the store wouldn’t exist without them. This would be a great opportunity for me to advance my work experience and work with a dedicated team of employees
I am reliable, trustworthy, hard working, a team player, and would be a great asset to your company. Thank you for the opportunity and hopefully we will see each other soon.
Contact me at any time for any information needed. Thanks again.
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Primarily, CORRECT YOUR MISSPELLINGS AND GRAMMAR:
"During my past work experience [comma] over the years I have obtained the skills required for the fast-paced work environment as the Cruise line industry.
[Outline your earlier qualifications and the values you learned in each position.] – Amusement park, Produce clerk, etc.
Include any foreign languages you know or fluently speak.
Thank them for considering your application for (BE VERY SPECIFIC ON WHICH POSITION YOU ARE SEEKING.)
Larger corporations like this receive MANY applications as most are simply "Filed in File-13" (thown in the trash.)
*Touch-up your closing by asking for a reply from them (either by telephone call <-most appropriate, so they can speak with yourself, a live person) or by contacting your list of References on your Resume.
Ask if you may call them within a set time-period – AND DO THIS by that time to verify their receiving your ap. and their decision.
Keep your log of contacts with them, so you can refer to it when you need it or choose to re-apply with them or elsewhere.
GOOD LUCK and Happy Sailing!
I think its great!!
First, you have some spelling/grammatical errors which should be fixed. Make sure your tenses are correct. If there are errors in your cover letter, they won’t look at your resume.
Second, focus on your skills, not just your experiences.
Maybe you should check out this website:
http://workabroadtravel.suite101.com/article.cfm/strategies_for_getting_hired_by_a_cruise_line
First of all make sure your spelling and grammar are correct. Also try not to use the same word over and over again; like "opportunity". I made a few changes (mostly spelling) to your cover letter, which you may keep or disregard as you will. You don’t have to be too specific in a cover letter, so I replaced "produce" with "retail" as it sounds more customer oriented, but is still factual. You might want to stress how you like working with, and get along very well with, all kinds and ages of people. Let them know you are serious but also fun.
All in all, your letter sounds pretty good. Good luck.
"I am writing in response to the wonderful opportunity to work on your Norwegian Cruise Line America cruise ship. Based on the requirements listed in the ad, I feel that my skills and experience are a great match for the position.
From my work experience over the years I have obtained the skills required to work in a fast paced environment such as this one.¬ Over the summer I worked at an amusement park which had many staff members and customers on a daily basics. I also work as a retail clerk, where the customers are number one, as the store wouldn’t exist without them. This job would be a great opportunity.
I am reliable, trustworthy, hard working, a team player, and would be a great asset to your company. Thank you for your consideration, and hopefully we will see each other soon."
I am writing in response to the wonderful employment opportunity for work aboard Norwegian Cruise Liner- America. I am confident that my skills and experience make me an excellent candidate for the position of "__________".
My most recent position, at a amusement park, involved a fast-paced environment, where I excelled in customer service. I maintained a commendable rapport with fellow staff members, supervisors, and customers on a daily basis. As a produce clerk, I developed attention to detail in customer service. I understand that customers are likely to remain loyal to companies whose employees put them first.
I have a high level of integrity, am dependable and reliable. I am immediately available for employment. I have strong references available at your request. I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration, and hope to be in contact with your Human Resources Department soon.
Sincerely,