May you please look over my cover letter for bank teller? REPORTING PEOPLE WITH NON RELATED ANSWERS:)?
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I need sum advice its my first.
I am interested in the Teller position Bank of America has posted on their Careers website. I am a recent graduate of Bakersfield High School and have been servicing costumer requests, selling and up-selling new products for over two years.
I am a person who is hardworking, determined, a team player, and very outgoing. Being punctual and organized has always been considered a strong trait of mine. Please contact me so that we may arrange a time to meet and discuss where my qualifications and skills may relate to your current needs. I look forward to speaking with you further.
Thank you
Took out my info and other stuff.
I feel like i need to put in something showing that i researched the bank of america and how I would love working for the company. I researched but didnt find anything to put in my letter
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Overall, I think you have a good cover letter. I would suggest a couple changes though.
"I am interested in the teller position posted on the Bank of America Careers website." Removing the word their. The person reading this is a representative of Bank of America and the word their makes it seem like you are referring to some other company.
In the third sentence I would suggest removing "a person who is". The reader will know you are a person.
Generally speaking, you would like to have something to say that shows you have researched the position. However, unless there is some special need that Bank of America requires of it’s employees/ tellers that other banks do not, there may not be anything useful to add.
Hope this helps. Good luck on your job hunt!
Here you go – its not terrible, but I fixed it up a little for you.
I am interested in the Teller position posted on your website. I am a recent graduate of Bakersfield High School. I have work experience at ____________ and have been servicing customer requests, selling and up-selling new products for over two years. I feel that this experience will suit this position well.
I am hardworking, determined, a team player, and very outgoing. Punctuality and organization are strong traits of mine. Please contact me so that we may arrange a time to meet and discuss where my qualifications and skills may relate to your current needs. I look forward to speaking with you further.
Thank you
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The main thing is that your resume should show that you have stability in your previous job. The bank needs you to have at least 6 months of cash handling and or customer service experience. I think your selling skills will work well for you. You will need it as a teller.
Your cover letter looks good. Provided your resume looks just as good or better. Meaning you show stability in the workplace. It’s hard for any employer to hire someone that has bounced around too many jobs in short periods of time.
I would leave out the part where it says Please contact me…
Someone will contact you if they like what they see. Just leave your contact information. Make sure to post your cover letter and resume online when you submit your application. Someone will get back to you within 72 hours or less if they like what they see.
Good luck with the process.
I think you’re a shoe-in for a banking position; you spelt the word some as in for some advice, as SUM, the total!
Other than that, I think you’ve pretty much said what is needed. I didn’t realize this was your letter of introduction, I thought it was still part of the question at first and my thought was, "Well, all you have to do is tell them what you’re telling us and"…I’d hire you. or at least let you apply and test!